Do you like this excerpt of my story?

Good and descriptive, i like it. Introduces important elements without giving away too much which makes the reader want to continue. Constructive criticism, because it lacks description of the specific people this is quite important later on.

Does any one know where i can find a nike hat?

Now what im looking for is one like what the pro golfers wear that is just black with the white nike logo on the front also if anyone want to give me one that would be great!

2000 chevy Impala surging, whats wrong?

Sounds like an air-intake vacuum problem. With all the engine work you've had recently, a vacuum tube may have been left unconnected. Check all connections and run tubes to ensure they are secure.

What can i bring on a airplane with me?

Well, I learned not to take guns; the security thought I was a terrorist so I had to kill them and steal the airplanes.

Is it called "Theocratic Warfare" when a member of "God's Only True Organization" lies?

War is a horrible model for religion. It is used with respect to the resistance against evil, but is that is misused by the demagogues among us.

Vans Shoe size Vs Nike Shoe Size?

Vans and Nike are pretty similar, so i have vans in 9.5 and Nikes in 9.5, but vans stretch a little more, so i would have got the Nikes in 10, so in your case id get the 11, if you dont mind your shoes a little snug then get the 10 1/2

Why Am I Having Trouble Studying?

ADHD sounds like a good possibility. You sound a lot like myself, and I was recently diagnosed with ADHD. I have been prescribed Ritalin and it does help me focus and stay on task with what I'm supposed to be doing.